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Friday, March 17, 2023, Slice of Life Challenge #23: Day 17/31 Long day at mall (Haiku poem)

Well, I am trying a Haiku after a long while. I was motivated by someone in the first week. My bad, I don't remember the name, but thanks for reminding me! Today's haiku is about a tiring but enjoyable day at the mall.




The weekend brings fun so
shopping and coffee at mall
tired as the bird's wings.


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Leigh Anne Eck
Leigh Anne Eck
Mar 19, 2023

The comparison to the bird's wings is perfect.

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Nadia  Fatima
Nadia Fatima
Mar 22, 2023
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Thanks

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Molly Hogan
Molly Hogan
Mar 17, 2023

Lovely ending line!

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Nadia  Fatima
Nadia Fatima
Mar 18, 2023
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Thank you.

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